Latest Animatic

Okay, here is my latest animatic...still a lot, lot of work needs doing to it: need to start cleaning up the animation, colour it, sort my backgrounds out etc etc...but I will get there...! One or two things that definitely need changing: shot 2, where Bob is lying on his bed, with a great big erection...I decided that Bob needs to be full length in this shot... not just have him showing his face... because it will then 'flow' better with the shot after it (shot 3)......Another bit I am considering playing with: where he falls down the stairs could be a bit more comical...have Bob bouncing around a bit!